Review Detail of Raylen2222_Hunt in A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

overall I don't like it went I started reading this I thought hmmm it would be good but... wrong what the fuck is wrong with this Author hello the power scaling is shit one moment the Mc is strong the next his weak what the fuck he train with the immortal witch Scathach and he barely can defeat any of his opponents i feel like this Author need a wake up call......maybe a slap on the face would do because he has all the resources,knowledge, and teachers to grow strong but this bitch as Mc is weak Sauce can't defeat his opponents only knows how to harass women because he likes them blaming it on his Devil/dragon aspect like come on give me truly a good reason to read the book more since the romance feels force.and theirs the point this guy wants freedom, freedom is earned from hard work and having the strength to do as you wish but bitch what do I see this guy gets push around like some common whore. he had the time to get strength at Skyrim perfected his Magic and Swordmanship but it's wasted every single time he has a Meridia a daedric goddess with vast amounts of knowledge.....and he didn't think I can I don't know ask for some tips or tricks or a Magic book lost to time.this Author need to think on the way forward because this book isn't even worth people's time some may like it but honestly this needs a revamp maybe some good Authors out their can fix this cluster fuck of a book.