Review Detail of Kairyn in A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

I like the story. Honestly the relationship with Artoria is a bit off putting, if only because it seems shes being used as a fluffer between two other woman at times. But, I like the character arc. The main character does seem weirdy forgetful at times, but I marked it down as kaleidoscope shenanigans. Other than that the story feels well written with the author seemingly having an actual idea where the story is heading. Which is the first time for me as a fanfiction reader.