Review Detail of JanDarkv1 in GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
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I saw great potential in the book and I started. But the beginning is so boring that doing housework is more enjoyable and I'm not exaggerating. There is no need to make excuses such as the beginning of books is like this, bla bla, I have read books with very successful beginnings. I'm sorry, but I quit.
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
DMadLord
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Bro your novel condition more than 1000 chap but less than 2M views This itself shows your book so i will not even bigin it but i think you shoul write book similar to shadow slave or kill the sun because they are currentle trending and please remove 18+ tag and try to make logicar power system after atleast 2 days of thinking and dont make mc powerful from the start but give something unique which makes him strongest al last but not in conventional way. Because MC should have cheat code without it he just feels hollow and try to be more dark in novel not some child fantasy.
DMadLord:It is a pity. You will be missed.
you said this, "dont make mc powerful from the start but give something unique which makes him strongest al last but not in conventional way."You are telling me that you have never read a book where the MC becomes strong at the end? This idea is unique?I won't mention anything else about your comment but this suggestion makes you unreliable.
HumansLastWish:Bro your novel condition more than 1000 chap but less than 2M views This itself shows your book so i will not even bigin it but i think you shoul write book similar to shadow slave or kill the sun because they are currentle trending and please remove 18+ tag and try to make logicar power system after atleast 2 days of thinking and dont make mc powerful from the start but give something unique which makes him strongest al last but not in conventional way. Because MC should have cheat code without it he just feels hollow and try to be more dark in novel not some child fantasy.