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This has a lot of potential. This book only made me intrigued at first, but when you get passed the information dump, you see it’s true worth. What sets this apart is the fact that the author can monologue about certain world building aspects that don’t sound boring and makes it interesting. It’s one of the hardest things books can establish and can make the difference on how much you invest into the book. QUALITY = 5/5⭐️ The author does a great job properly fleshing out characters. They’re characters that make the story lively. CHARACTER’S = 5/5⭐️ The biggest problem though is the huge information dump in the beginning that makes it hard for readers to even consider investing their time into it. Only with proper world building can readers have any ground to invest in the book. What makes it redeemable is when the MC does reincarnate and development is smooth afterwards. STORY DEVELOPMENT = 3/5⭐️ Everything else is done wonderfully and updates are smooth. My only concern is how this book will conclude later on. The characters have so much potential built into them that I’m worried they’ll won’t live up to it in the end.

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Nice review. Has I always say, this book is my first attempt at writing and it wasn't easy. Things are not as easy as they look. I had to start before I realised how difficult writing is. I made a lot of errors when I started but I got better thanks to practice and constructive criticism. The first few chapters are tough to chew on but things get better after that.