Review Detail of goodeygoody in White rose tears

Although the story itself is enjoyable and fun, the progression of the story-line is affected by spelling and grammatical errors. As I read through this novel, I found some words without capitalization and comma splices that don't ruin the story entirely, but It happened often enough to catch my attention while reading. As I say this, I still enjoyed what I'd read, and I'd recommend it to others. The issues I saw can be easily squashed with some editing (I do the same for my own story). Keep up the good work.