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OtakuModeEngage
OtakuModeEngageLv1211mthOtakuModeEngage

Yo author, instead of using 'judging look' all the time, what about mixing in words like: 'measuring', 'critical', 'musing', 'contemplative', 'damning', and 'despising' instead of 'judging'; and 'glance', 'glare', 'glaze', 'stare', 'gape', 'peer', 'focus', 'observation,' 'examination', 'inspection', and 'view' instead of 'look'? Like common man, expand your vocabulary a little and mix it up, 'cause this singular pairing has gotten old.

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Esper Harem in the Apocalypse

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OtakuModeEngage
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And with no limitations on his power and abilities, and no challenges that he has to struggle to overcome, the story loses any sense of risk and potential for loss, which takes away the excitement and tension from the story. Instead, it just becomes a checklist of easy, meaningless victories.