(C231) It's a very good story, looking forward to more chapters. Fun/Easy to read, has some good touches here and there, a lot of plot progression, and more importantly a lot of groundwork being done for future expansion of the story. I don't particularly care too much about the numbers/system, but so far there hasn't been too much inconsistency in the way game elements are handled. Dumb things behave like dungeon encounters while smarter enemies behave a bit more lifelike. Author is also actively patching up obvious plotholes/inconsistencies in a timely manner, and not 50 chapters into the future like a band-aid. Good work so far author, keep it up.
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