Review Detail of joelburch in Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

When I started this , the actions of MC at the start almost dissuaded me since it's a really serious subject and for me to vibe with it, the writing has to feel from a genuine place. I think u handled it pretty well, if there was all this fake edgelord behavior throughout the novel or BS psudo psychology I would have dropped. Instead u wrote a really interesting novel with interesting powers, and lots of plots and characters driving it. I think what I most enjoy is how fast world events are unwinding, how things don't just wait for MC. He is barely keeping up and that style of writing is engaging, keep up the strong work