There are somethings I dont like, I have to search up each card by my self. Also you at times refer to the mc as Kamsas , other than that everything is okay, also at the beginning of the novel, the way of writing was confusing, probably cause i wasn't used to seeing something like that here, its something id see in a literature book 2 b read in school. Over all its okay, use a simpler way of writing, we come here to relax and enjoy our selves not start trying to translate things with our brains again. Also, I want more Chapters.
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