Huh, that's an interesting take for a SAO fanfic. An Asuna POV and I presume slight changes into the world as well, though since it's only chapter 1.3 at the time of writing this, it's too early to say. Quality could be better but it's still readable. Chances are, author will probably get better as time goes on. Chapters are fairly short though, so you can either speed read this or wait until the author releases more chapters.
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