Review Detail of Raven_Crowley in MHA : Light is Everything

Item: MHA : Light is Everything
Rating: 3

Review detail

Raven_CrowleyLv32yrRaven_Crowley

A new take on MHA fanfic with not starting as a kid and studying heroics. The premise is good and the path is promising. I just read the first chapter, but I couldn't stand the grammar, so for now I will only rate it 3 star. I hope the author will find a good editor since the story has huge potential. I will come back and rate it higher once this story is edited well. Cheers!

MHA : Light is Everything

RockSForD

Liked it!

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RockSForDAuthorRockSForD

Bro, I understand you. Can you read on and say is that still bad? Because it seems to me that I have improved a little (or not)

2yr

Raven_CrowleyLv3Raven_Crowley

No problem, man. I'll at least read before the mini arcs.

RockSForD:Bro, I understand you. Can you read on and say is that still bad? Because it seems to me that I have improved a little (or not)

2yr