Review Detail of Tobi_or_Not_to_be in Unlimited Gacha Spins

Tobi dose understands that author is new to the writing community and Tobi is judging too quickly since the fanfic dosen't even have 15 chapters. Tobi feels the the idea of an OPMC with unlimited gacha is indeed an unique idea to many but execution of the fanfic is very wrong .While unlimited gacha dose sounds something never done before but stories with reality bending , unlimited shop points and unlimited wishes are the same . The characters and the world chosen is something tobi has not read before it dosen't provides that excitement for a new world overall the development of MC ,the Character design the writing quality all can be improved hope you take some of tobi's advice good luck for future novels/updates