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MikomiMirai
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Earlier chapters were entertaining despite the slow progression, as the idea or concept of the fanfic was 'unique' in my view as I hadn't read any similar fics at that time. After the author finished the 'minecraft arc' it started to become dull and boring, as the interaction of the MC with other characters felt forced or unnatural. Furthermore the MC's reasoning on why he chose Fortnite was weak, I mean in the earlier chapters wasn't shooter games congested? as such wouldn't games like Dark Souls, Monster Hunter, etc. be more suitable and unique. Lastly making the MC traverse into other worlds was probably what made it boring for me, as this concept is common nowadays, and a lot of such fic have longer chapters and consistent update schedules.

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Rigit08
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i agree and the romance is so forced😞.