there is no relevant world information provided nor is there any cultivation explanation, professions are mentioned for the first time saying its his third profession. The only saving grace of the story is the concept but everything else be it continuity, grammar, and even story progress feels like the ramblings of a 5 year old recounting the story told to him at bedtime to his friends. Though its cute when a child does it but not here.
Juju Lost in the Fog
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