The story itself is pretty good. The MC isn't as overpowered as most Soul Land fanfics, so that's a nice change of pace. However, the grammar is just awful. The translation isn't much better than machine translation quality. There's not a single grammatically correct sentence in the entire story so far, so it's a pain to read.
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