shameless author, pssss...... I mean translator with a 5 star review. I love fanfic and mostly one's about doulou, seeing this i decided to translate this fanfic with yall.
You should pay a lot more attention to translating. Locations/ Names are one of the most important things in a novel and i already see you switching names between their chinese/ english counterparts repeatedly.
E.g. Heaven dou --> Tiandou