Review Detail of ThisNovelSucksBro in Repudiated

Uh... Just an update, but the dog has a purpose, and the locking of the harem was solely because I don't think myself competent enough of a writer to write in a Harem with a large number of girls. It's complicated. That's all, and I wanted to give myself a little less work with it. Anyway, thanks for the review.

I get what you're saying however your harem writing was fine in the Star Wars novel bar them barely being in the novel (except ahsoka) so I don't understand where you're coming from. Just don't rush an ending like before and take your time then there'll be no problem? It's not like they have to be in every single chapter or be relevant 24/7. I moved onto your Obito novel anyway so I'm seeing how that'll play out.

for the immortality of sasuké, he should obtain the Reibi/he should obtain the dna of Ginkaku and Kinkaku they are distant descendants of the Rikudô Sennin, the Golden and Silver Brothers survived by having eaten the flesh of a bijuu becoming pseudo-jinchūriki are people who have abilities similar to jinchūriki without possessing a tailed beast. They possess extraordinary powers and, in some cases, more powerful than ordinary jinchūriki. this will be very useful if he intends to devour the tailed beasts

There are many theories and ideas I have, that may or may not be implemented. Some including stuff like Hidan's immortality, the regenerative abilities of Hashirama's cells, the regenerative abilities via being a jinchuriki, the regenerative abilities through Uzumaki genetics, the Gelel stones energy, and some other miscellaneous stuff. Good suggestion though, thanks. 👍😉

Immortality in the naruto universe 1-Body modification (Hidan has superhuman durability Even with these severed limbs, he is still able to survive .2-Guessing or being a living chakra life form Tailed demons, Reibi, Moryo, spirits....3-Extending Kakuzu lifespan (Hearts), absorption or devoured the chakra, the hachirama cell, Being from a clan with high vitality Uzumaki, Senju, Clan Ôtsutsuki, capacity for regeneration... .4-Reincarnation the seal of karma, the orochimaru technique, Asura, Indra this type of immortality is limited by the soul: The need to transfer the soul to a new body, the risk of losing its powers, its memories as Asura and Indra, the destruction or sealing of the soul, to be reborn as a child (Asura and Indra). These are the different types of immortality that I noticed in the naruto universe, the shinigami is considered a powerful spirit and the Ôtsutsuki clan is a superior life form, so no real immortal

I wonder if it's possible to absorb the shinigami?, the Chimera technique is a kinjutsu that was developed by Hiruko, so I wonder what will happen if Hiruko confronts Sasuke and discovers the version of his technique that Sasuke developed. The Criminal Brothers were a group of three brothers with special ninjutsu. (Renga, Jiga, Ruga)

So there was no tsunade????????

Whose the harem members so far?

Apparently, your reply got deleted but I can still view it through your profile. I think you should just keep those and not anymore. After all, it will be hard to include all of them in the story as it is. They will have very little screentime with that amount.

Can you not make some older make more closer to MC mostly tsunade because you will only destroying some of our expectation. It's very disappointing man.

But the rest is good, also the way you add the movie because there's a lot of thing it can to MC like the immortality although not it's only eternal youth it's still good. Keep it up👍