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Osborn123
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Terrible story. No other way to describe it. Since the very begining the mc receives all kinds of good things that fall on his lap, just like that and without any reason. He becomes Lord Slithering, gets abilities from the basilisk after killing it, gets a fortune with a simple visit to Gringots, gets very convenient proof of people like Dumbeldore and some other about ignoring the last will of Harry's parents, gets convenient letters that tells him about the truth with Petigrew, he gets a bond with a 5X magical beast, he gets a library filled with all the books that ever entered into Hogwarts and whatever Slithering left behind, does some rituals on himself that transforms him into an adonis with very powerful magic, he finds a wandmaker in knocturn alley inside a cheap store that happened to be the greatest wandmaker in the world and makes Harry not one but two new wands with who knows how many cores, etc... Well, the story is just like that. Everything good that exists simply falls into the lap of the mc without even giving a proper explanation about why that happened. There is no real plot in the story, or perhaps one could say that the story is about how the whole world bends itself at the convenience of the mc.

Brocken Shackles

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CephJester
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So... What rating did you give him? The numerical value? Because from what I've seen, even with all that, it would be at least a 2.5, or a 3.0...

PursueImmortality
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