Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in I guess i do love you!!!

Here are my honest thoughts about this novel that might be quite hurtful to hear and I am sorry if it's offending you, I think the author should give more description about the emotion and the atmosphere in the story. Based on what I read, the author only mentions the emotion inside the brackets which is form is best if you give more detailed such as when angry, you describe like the eyes furrowing to make the reader more intriguing to read your book. As for the character, the MC and the mother are fine and I can judge more since this is only 1 chapter. I do hope they are further exploration in the futures Overall that's all I have to say and keep up the good work!!