Review Detail of Rivel_Emerald in MMORPG: Rise of the Peerless Pumpkinmancer
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First and foremost, I strongly recommend this book! (As of writing, I am only chapter 26 in, but it seems the book has started very recently). Pro's: 1. World building: The author thus far has built the world in a way I consider refreshing compared to other novels I have read. Instead of information dumping everything from the get go, we are "shown" rather than "told". From reading I am able to pick up the state of their dystopian society based upon several interactions early on in the book. (the homeless man beaten, the mutated animals, the
MMORPG: Rise of the Peerless Pumpkinmancer
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I dont wanna drag it on too much sooo ill be more concise. Other pro's: 2. Character interaction. The exchanges between characters feels real enough. Sure, some of the interactions are can be a bit zany and wacky, but they are done realistically and add a comedic aspect to the story. The story can be serious when it needs, and relaxed when it wants too. Also thus far, the story has non of the over the top, forced, robotic dialog i have read in some cultivation novels. 3. Grammer. So far there have not been any jarring errors. I havnt spotted any obvious run on sentences. The authors spelling is consistently great. All in all, pretty solid.
Lastly, I don't have any cons but instead I have concerns. Will this novel maintain this same level of writing quality? Will we encounter heart crushing levels of plotholes? Will the writing follow a decent release schedule and not be dropped for many months at time? As the novel is in its infancy (26 chapters total) these fears are valid id say for anyone picking up a new book. However! The author has not given any signs of my fears coming true. I strongly believe this books has potential and will be a fun one. I look forward to the future releases!