Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Hadrian Peverell in TVD

Initial Evaluation: Average Tons of grammatical errors which greatly affects the story development. I highly recommend utilizing grammarly as it will not only correct some of your mistakes but it may also help you improving your English vocabulary. The story itself has Potential but it is too long winded, I suggest making decisive changes such as direct approach and enough foundational building for both the MC & story.