I like it, but there could be more. The story building is fine, yet I can't really read it too well with all of the grammatical errors. If the errors are reduced or fixed in the later chapters I do not know, someone please leave a response to this review if they have and i will then happily read it.
Darkswan
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LIKEI'm sorry I'll have to change this after reading it again, I found out webnovel has been weirdly jumbling words and that glitch has just gone under the radar
Darkswan:Can you tell me which chapters you found grammatical problems in? it will be easier for me to edit
Snowie_nee:I'm sorry I'll have to change this after reading it again, I found out webnovel has been weirdly jumbling words and that glitch has just gone under the radar