Review Detail of lapis in ARIFURETA: The Otherworldly Alchemist

Read till Chapter 38. Writing quality - 5/5 - Great writing quality. Story Development - 4/5 - Great development at the beginning, like it upto the part where MC fakes his death to enter Orcus dungeon. After that, found the story to be a bit stagnant but still good enough. Felt that MC never took inspiration from animes that he had watched. Could have tried flame alchemy like Roy Mustang from FMA. Otherwise, imo, this FF is much better than majority arifureta ffs on this website/app. Character Design - 4/5 - MC seems obsessed with alchemy in general and creating life in particular. I am unsure whether he ever remembered the first assistant he had (the OC maid) after he entered the dungeon. He thought of that maid as his 1st friend ever, so hope there is development there, like last I read it was mentioned that she wanted to avenge MC by killing Hiyama but the empire was keeping tabs on her and then after some more than 10 chapters it's all about MC in dungeon. Would have been great if interludes about what's happening outside would be a bit regular (like after every 5 or 10 chapters). Updating Stability - 5/5 - Great updating Stability. World Background - 5/5 - For me Arifureta is one of the best isekai anime/webnovel as it was the first harem fic that ended with MC having married his women. This, have happy memories related to this and given 5/5. Overall - 4.6/5.0 - I find the buildup of this FF to be interesting and will continue reading further. Keep up the great work author 👍.