Review Detail of Fat_Cultivator in Marvel : Different Peter Parker

Honestly this is a strong meh. I am not one to review if its an average book but i just had to due to the wasted potential. author, I know its hard to write, i myself tried it, its bad, but u have some massive errors 1-GET GRAMMARLY, its free, or just write on google docs 2-Your MC is a xinxia/Wuxia MC, make him change his attitude and become smarter. 3-The thing about Karma made no sense, donating to people doesnt=good deed. MC just threW money, never knew were it meant, or did smth to help with hiS time and Body. Clear these, and u have more