Review Detail of Sam5ational in The Fallen's System

Author review here! I will make this as brief as possible. First and foremost, the start is slow. Heck, until now (chapter 30) MC still doesn't have his system! However, there is clear character and story development in every chapter! Chapters are incredibly short too so the story hasn't developed too far as the number suggests. I wanted to focus on the world-building and natural transition of what I thought would happen when you put normal, modern people in a world filled with blood and gore hence being slow. But all of these are based on my ideas and thoughts so some of the reactions you may not agree with. Information is explained when the situation needs it, so you can expect little to no sudden information dumps. But do keep in mind this is my first novel and inconsistencies, plot holes, and awful pacing is to be expected, however, I stitched and glued the mistakes and gaps as best as I could at the start so unless you're the type to read into every line, you won't find any errors. And if you do, please notify me by messaging on the paragraph so I can fix it. Prior to this, I only had 3 months of writing experience so I hope you stay with me on this journey! My updates are daily, but school makes it rather difficult to write. Regardless, I will make sure to at least post 2 chapters every week!