Review Detail of Sarah_Lawart in Re: Life - Business & Technology

(To be honest, I don't think this "Romance" with hailee is going to work, honestly it's going too fast and Hailee is looking more like a gold digger who wants Vince's money, and like, being a very rich person Vince should be more paranoid and he should have a little more trust issues, knowing that a lot of people might want his stuff or even kill him, so I think there should be some event that changes his character, and I hope he doesn't stay with Hailee, and that the real romance is for later in the story, it's not necessary to rush things, especially in character development, being honest author, you almost didn't develop vince's personality right.