Review Detail of OrIgIn in Re: Life - Business & Technology

In chapter 16 as of this review. First of all, the writing quality is great. There are some grammatical errors in the chapters, but nothing that will take away from the story. Second, Updates. I have not read enough to understand this aspect yet. Third, the story feels like it goes too fast. For example, the fact that the friends of the MC are 13-year-old's and they learned way too fast to be realistic. Or at least I think they learned too fast. Forth, the character design, it's ok. All the main characters are fine but they all speak like they are adults. Also, the fact that the adults they speak to, speak to them back in adult manner and take them seriously is just unbelievable for me. Some characters, like the mother, just don't feel important to the story in any way, they are unnecessary. And finally, the world background. Honestly it's just a modern 2020 human with deep knowledge about technology going back 10 years, or was it 2023, I can't remember. In conclusion, honestly this story is one that someone would read in their off time because of boredom, or if they just have nothing else to do. It's a great concept, but poorly executed with the children part. Like author could have made it more a gradual process to get to where the mc is right now. Develop the characters more, provide importance to some of the non-important characters and delve more deeply into the MC. Also the MC, he is kind of simple, with no other purpose than to gain his supposed joy, but all he is doing is just making technology better from context.