It has potential but ruined early 1 mc shifts to being 13 to quickly 2 mc focusing on bitcoin instead of other avenues of wealth 3 not clear on how much earned and how much spent ruins immersion 4 ex husband hired an expert yet a 13 year old defeated him easily without real expertise 5 not clear where set 6 illogical speed for earnings 7 why only focus on digital and not land etc 8 mc is multimillionaire yet you expect readers to believe he isn't getting more attention at school 9 mother follows everything he says because he says it 10 to many time skips
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LIKEis that a positive or a negative highlighting weaknesses would improve on the writing and make story more enjoyable
malachi_Pharr:Pretty dang good review in terms of solid compl aints
VXZD_ZD:He lied about half of these things guys don't believe in this review
VXZD_ZD:He lied about half of these things guys don't believe in this review