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Review Detail of BrianGallacher7 in Re: Life - Business & Technology

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BrianGallacher7
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It has potential but ruined early 1 mc shifts to being 13 to quickly 2 mc focusing on bitcoin instead of other avenues of wealth 3 not clear on how much earned and how much spent ruins immersion 4 ex husband hired an expert yet a 13 year old defeated him easily without real expertise 5 not clear where set 6 illogical speed for earnings 7 why only focus on digital and not land etc 8 mc is multimillionaire yet you expect readers to believe he isn't getting more attention at school 9 mother follows everything he says because he says it 10 to many time skips

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Re: Life - Business & Technology

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ZFang
ZFangLv4ZFang

Yeah, I had similar issues with this novel. I would personally rate it 3.5 but that's about it.

malachi_Pharr
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Pretty dang good review in terms of solid compl aints

BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

is that a positive or a negative highlighting weaknesses would improve on the writing and make story more enjoyable

malachi_Pharr:Pretty dang good review in terms of solid compl aints
DoNt_TrY_mE
DoNt_TrY_mELv10DoNt_TrY_mE

Well than I will not even bother start reading this

VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4VXZD_ZD

He lied about half of these things guys don't believe in this review

BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

anyone who reads thisthis is the author replying not a randomer

VXZD_ZD:He lied about half of these things guys don't believe in this review
VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4VXZD_ZD

If you are not being ironic your iq is negative

BrianGallacher7:anyone who reads thisthis is the author replying not a randomer
BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

you claim I lied explain, i explained everything

VXZD_ZD:He lied about half of these things guys don't believe in this review
BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

and when you cant come up with answers you resort to insults

VXZD_ZD:If you are not being ironic your iq is negative
VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4VXZD_ZD

Because half of the things you said were not true

BrianGallacher7:you claim I lied explain, i explained everything
VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4VXZD_ZD

Or you lied or you didn't even read like 20 chapters from the novel

BrianGallacher7:you claim I lied explain, i explained everything
VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4VXZD_ZD

Answers to what? I read the entire novel if you want me to answer you something I can answer you

BrianGallacher7:and when you cant come up with answers you resort to insults
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