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Review Detail of Idealist in Re: Life - Business & Technology

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Idealist
IdealistLv132yrIdealist

Overall is pretty good. The only thing that I didn't like about this novel is too much involvement in politics, especially in military affairs. But it's okay, I have an idea too. I hope he will install secret superweapons that nobodies know from the goverment on satellite. something like particle uplink cannon on the game of 'command and conquer generals' series. and an 'anti-gravity' bomb. for his forces. Antigravity has so many potentials. He should focus on that direction. Other than that is about romance, I think he needs to start dating his friend like Jessica 😅. it would make this novel more colorful. And there is one thing. he needs to search for some explanations for how he goes back on the past. Like for example the existence of a parallel universe where he was a genius and created a time machine and took pities on his parallel self so that one particular parallel self (which is him in this story universe) goes back on the past

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Re: Life - Business & Technology

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Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

Thanks for the review. I didn't have ideas for the conflict and struggle in the story and decided to do more politics and military which makes kinda sense for someone as rich as the MC. I'm also implementing current social issues which you may or may not like. Appreciate it, fam!

Idealist
IdealistLv13Idealist

Please make something like one championship. MMA, to beat wwe 😝

Viincentt:Thanks for the review. I didn't have ideas for the conflict and struggle in the story and decided to do more politics and military which makes kinda sense for someone as rich as the MC. I'm also implementing current social issues which you may or may not like. Appreciate it, fam!
Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

Definitely, but it won't be 'traditional' and instead will be related to gaming. Don't want to spoil too much. About the military and political aspect, I wanted Future Tech to be similar to Arasaka Corporation but not evil and actually create positive changes in the world.

Idealist:Please make something like one championship. MMA, to beat wwe 😝