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Viincentt
ViincenttAuthor2yrViincentt

Author here. Thank you guys for checking out and reading my first attempt at writing a novel. I would highly appreciate any feedback in the reviews and you are welcome to message me on webnovel about the novel. Thank you again!!

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Re: Life - Business & Technology

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GM43ver
GM43verLv13GM43ver

will there be romance.

Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

When the main character is older but this novel won't be focusing on romance though. Thank you for taking the time and reading

GM43ver:will there be romance.
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv14TigerBlooImmortal

I've been reading and I found that there is a lack of presence about the mc, I feel like you should try to focus on the mc as a person and those around him. For example relationships he may have and things he mayike to do in his off time. Make it more than a summary or his companies achievements each chapter. Who is the mc, What makes the mc himself

Asmondeus
AsmondeusLv15Asmondeus

write quicker

Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

Sorry about the release schedule. I am still taking my final exams for the fall semester.

Asmondeus:write quicker
LazyCrown
LazyCrownLv14LazyCrown

Who is vince Dalton? Is that tony stark? Is tHat like his Real name or tony father?

Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

Vince Dalton is the MC. I compare him to Tony Stark, as an intelligent and successful businessman. The synopsis may be confusing if you're unfamiliar with Iron Man (Tony Stark). Sorry about that. I've been thinking of an updated synopsis for newer readers for a while now

LazyCrown:Who is vince Dalton? Is that tony stark? Is tHat like his Real name or tony father?
LazyCrown
LazyCrownLv14LazyCrown

Okay. thank you! I am still liking the book Please dont stOp updating.

Viincentt:Vince Dalton is the MC. I compare him to Tony Stark, as an intelligent and successful businessman. The synopsis may be confusing if you're unfamiliar with Iron Man (Tony Stark). Sorry about that. I've been thinking of an updated synopsis for newer readers for a while now
Brandon_Foster
Brandon_FosterLv14Brandon_Foster

schools always more important, but don't neglect us 😆

Viincentt:Sorry about the release schedule. I am still taking my final exams for the fall semester.
SpoiledSecrets
SpoiledSecretsLv4SpoiledSecrets

So MC is like a ”good” version of Tony Stark?

Viincentt:Vince Dalton is the MC. I compare him to Tony Stark, as an intelligent and successful businessman. The synopsis may be confusing if you're unfamiliar with Iron Man (Tony Stark). Sorry about that. I've been thinking of an updated synopsis for newer readers for a while now
GrrodGroot2002
GrrodGroot2002Lv4GrrodGroot2002

The author should already start introducing or mentioning of Boca Cica as their space (star basen ) base what Elon builds his ships there and let them start building there. Or you can mantion about Discovery of High offsetmaterial and Neutralstate superconductor. That's my recomendation. P.S. You shoud read a book like I have Super USB Drive

Ali_AC
Ali_ACLv13Ali_AC

Author plz add some romance in the novel, because i’v never seen a novel where there is a male mc that creates a business and has a wife, all of the romance, urban novels with business ideas have female mc

DarkMist
DarkMistLv12DarkMist

Ain't that novel have too much racism.

GrrodGroot2002:The author should already start introducing or mentioning of Boca Cica as their space (star basen ) base what Elon builds his ships there and let them start building there. Or you can mantion about Discovery of High offsetmaterial and Neutralstate superconductor. That's my recomendation. P.S. You shoud read a book like I have Super USB Drive
GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3GawkGawk

dont like the anarchy group part, remove it and this would have been better

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv13Young_fruit_Smiley

I am not saying you should do harem . but romance is necessary â˜ș..... it would just be boring without it..... . read ( I'm a baller ) has best money earning & romance story, in which main focus is on wealth...... . furthermore, has all the wealth, character, relationship, funny.... & other aspects of development too...!!!😅

Viincentt:When the main character is older but this novel won't be focusing on romance though. Thank you for taking the time and reading
Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

You'll see more of the billionaire lifestyle starting from the Mega-yacht chapter!

Young_fruit_Smiley:I am not saying you should do harem . but romance is necessary â˜ș..... it would just be boring without it..... . read ( I'm a baller ) has best money earning & romance story, in which main focus is on wealth...... . furthermore, has all the wealth, character, relationship, funny.... & other aspects of development too...!!!😅
bored_filipino
bored_filipinoLv2bored_filipino

What will be the level of technology that the MC will have by the end of this novel? Are aliens humanoid or not? It's a great novel and I can't seem to find other business novels on the level of this or ones with male MC (I'm not a misogynist there's just too many of "regressed woman/wife of cool husband jajshssk" than the decent ones). Just hoped that the release rate will be faster.

Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

I’m writing the story as I go. I have a rough trajectory for the plot, but the tech level in the later chapters is hard to tell. Even I’m not so sure. Probably interstellar space travel would take a long time to develop

bored_filipino:What will be the level of technology that the MC will have by the end of this novel? Are aliens humanoid or not? It's a great novel and I can't seem to find other business novels on the level of this or ones with male MC (I'm not a misogynist there's just too many of "regressed woman/wife of cool husband jajshssk" than the decent ones). Just hoped that the release rate will be faster.
Kyoran
KyoranLv4Kyoran

una pregunta porque despues de desbloquear los nuevo capitulos no los puedo traducir al español?

Viincentt
ViincenttAuthorViincentt

Hay un problema con Google Translate que otros lectores han mencionado. (Google translated)

Kyoran:una pregunta porque despues de desbloquear los nuevo capitulos no los puedo traducir al español?