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XxEagleNightxX
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how about the mother? how about the mother? how about the mother? how about the mother? how about the mother? how about the mother? how about the mother?

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My Onee-chan-Sensei(Onee-San X Shota)

Katsuya27

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XxEagleNightxX
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it's about Haru x Onee... so only the two of them? Well since I noticed a harem tag so I thought the mother and other girls will join in.

Katsuya27:I wish there could be. That would nice, but like... its about haru x onee. would rather keep mother faithful. Same goes for haru. Sorry.
Katsuya27
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Hahaha, no worries about that. heh! I plan on adding a couple of special chapters on her. Nothing plot related though.

XxEagleNightxX
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oh... I actually want her to have some action with the MC. Any chances in the future?

Katsuya27:Hahaha, no worries about that. heh! I plan on adding a couple of special chapters on her. Nothing plot related though.
Katsuya27
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? Don't worry, I meant mom x haru. The special chapters will be on those two, unless I do a father x mother chap that I was planning, but still havent done. how? whatever. Anyways... what do you think of mother x onee. Now that I think about, there really isn't much about the parents in the story... hmmmmmmmm, ah! U got any ideas as to how I can add more about them and make them like proper supporting characters? I mean, I can do an arc about them but still. AHHH!! not sure what exactly i should do. sorry for long reply.

XxEagleNightxX:oh... I actually want her to have some action with the MC. Any chances in the future?
XxEagleNightxX
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by Mom x Haru and Mom x Onee... you mean it in 'that' way right? if so then I don't think Mom x Onee is that necessary. There are readers who don't like Yuri and readers who like it. If you add Yuri some readers will surely leave but a lot will of course still stay. But you can play it safe by not putting Yuri at all. Since those who likes or find Yuri acceptable won't leave anyway. However I think doing Mom x Haru x Onee is pretty fine. You can add a problem or put a unique trait/background or whatever to the parents and add it to the plot. So they will be more fleshed out as a character. I think you don't need to write Mom x father if you want to write Mom x Haru because somehow that would leave a bad taste in quite a lot of reader's mouth(including me). I'm surely looking forward to Mom x Haru it would be hot.

Katsuya27:? Don't worry, I meant mom x haru. The special chapters will be on those two, unless I do a father x mother chap that I was planning, but still havent done. how? whatever. Anyways... what do you think of mother x onee. Now that I think about, there really isn't much about the parents in the story... hmmmmmmmm, ah! U got any ideas as to how I can add more about them and make them like proper supporting characters? I mean, I can do an arc about them but still. AHHH!! not sure what exactly i should do. sorry for long reply.
XxEagleNightxX
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Nothing plot related, do you mean that the special chapter won't have any significance to the normal chapters? I'm confused. Like for example Mom will do Haru in the special chapters, but the thing that happened between them in the special chapters will have no connection in the normal chapters is that it?

Katsuya27:Hahaha, no worries about that. heh! I plan on adding a couple of special chapters on her. Nothing plot related though.
Katsuya27
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Hm~ I see makes sense. Will think about it. Never really planned the yuri anyways so its all good. a threesome hm~ Interesting. Flesh out hm~ I'll try my best then.

XxEagleNightxX:by Mom x Haru and Mom x Onee... you mean it in 'that' way right? if so then I don't think Mom x Onee is that necessary. There are readers who don't like Yuri and readers who like it. If you add Yuri some readers will surely leave but a lot will of course still stay. But you can play it safe by not putting Yuri at all. Since those who likes or find Yuri acceptable won't leave anyway. However I think doing Mom x Haru x Onee is pretty fine. You can add a problem or put a unique trait/background or whatever to the parents and add it to the plot. So they will be more fleshed out as a character. I think you don't need to write Mom x father if you want to write Mom x Haru because somehow that would leave a bad taste in quite a lot of reader's mouth(including me). I'm surely looking forward to Mom x Haru it would be hot.
Katsuya27
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Yes, it's pretty much an extra chapter in like mangas and stuff. It won't hav anything related to the plot.

XxEagleNightxX:Nothing plot related, do you mean that the special chapter won't have any significance to the normal chapters? I'm confused. Like for example Mom will do Haru in the special chapters, but the thing that happened between them in the special chapters will have no connection in the normal chapters is that it?
XxEagleNightxX
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ohh... is there no chance of it happening in normal chapters? I would really appreciate it.

Katsuya27:Yes, it's pretty much an extra chapter in like mangas and stuff. It won't hav anything related to the plot.
Katsuya27
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I wish there could be. That would nice, but like... its about haru x onee. would rather keep mother faithful. Same goes for haru. Sorry.

XxEagleNightxX:ohh... is there no chance of it happening in normal chapters? I would really appreciate it.
Lazy_Chicken_God
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This doesn't have anything to do with your conversation but have you dropped my unrivaled system ?

XxEagleNightxX:it's about Haru x Onee... so only the two of them? Well since I noticed a harem tag so I thought the mother and other girls will join in.
Katsuya27
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It will be harem... kinda. I mean...he's gonna have a couple of love interests. and stuff...

XxEagleNightxX:it's about Haru x Onee... so only the two of them? Well since I noticed a harem tag so I thought the mother and other girls will join in.
Degenerate_Panda
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Ah, so it’s fake harem…

Katsuya27:It will be harem... kinda. I mean...he's gonna have a couple of love interests. and stuff...
Katsuya27
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Um, I guess. Not sure what it is, but yeah. sounds like it should be that.

Degenerate_Panda:Ah, so it’s fake harem…
Degenerate_Panda
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Haha. I only mean that it is fake harem since while their are other women around the mc, he only winds up with a singular woman in a monogamous relationship.

Katsuya27:Um, I guess. Not sure what it is, but yeah. sounds like it should be that.
DaoistR8fJlx
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true harem or not?

Katsuya27:Hahaha, no worries about that. heh! I plan on adding a couple of special chapters on her. Nothing plot related though.