Review Detail of AbandonedButterfly in Virtual World : Pocket Sanctuary

Item: Virtual World : Pocket Sanctuary
Rating: 5

Review detail

AbandonedButterflyLv12yrAbandonedButterfly

The moment I read Mario Bros and Mario something in the 2nd chapter I automatically stopped reading cause what the heck?😭. Anyways it's good but could be better tbh.

Virtual World : Pocket Sanctuary

ChaosWriter

Liked it!

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ChaosWriterAuthorChaosWriter

I don't understand what you were trying to say in the first part. As for the second part, I am trying to make it better wholeheartedly. That's why I usually take 7 to 8 hrs to write 1500+ words. Anyway, thanks for the review.

2yr