Review Detail of bibiyenini in I Am Not Your Idol

Okay, so when I say honest review, I'll give you a roasting one. First, the title seemed to hit on Idol section, but not the whole title itself. Take note that Webnovel's algorithm catered books with clickbait titles and even the ones who viewed the novel completely. The cover doesn't seem intriguing to me, too, given the title showed a compass of where was the novel headed. Second, the theme. We're talking about a reincarnated or swapping or reborn or replacement of the MC to another one, and I know you wanted to show that to the audience. Think about it this way: what if the title of the book is 'Reborn As A Superstar' or 'I Became A Superstar For No Reason'. The theme may get mixed up with transmigration or even rebirth. Third, catchy synopsis. Your synopsis lack up the spice to fill up the reader's excitement to read your first chapter. It was the THIRD thing that readers will read, so better pay attention to all the intriguing aspect of every bit of your synopsis. Fourth, the first chapter didn't seem to pull in. It was a normal scene we see on Television (or even Korean dramas, because I like them, too) and I don't know if I was the only one knowing where it was headed. Make sure you let the readers jumped in the hook, addicting, and no one will be able to escape from. Last, the overall presentation. It takes time to improve, dear. I know you had a lot of struggle facing in front of the laptop to write, but believe me, this will all just be worth it at the end. Patience and passion is the key. I hope this helps. Good luck on your future endeavors!