Honestly it is very well written an a interesting read. But honestly i feel like the back and forth between whats in her head and whats actually there happens too often and takes away from the story
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LIKEThanks for your opinion! Unfortunately though it’s part of the story and a very important part. What’s happening to her affects the story like it affects her ❤️ Howver, I can promise that it’ll be dealt with by, at the very least, chapter 12. I don’t want to promise sooner and then lie so maybe sooner but for sure by then.
MistressAlly123:Thanks for your opinion! Unfortunately though it’s part of the story and a very important part. What’s happening to her affects the story like it affects her ❤️ Howver, I can promise that it’ll be dealt with by, at the very least, chapter 12. I don’t want to promise sooner and then lie so maybe sooner but for sure by then.