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The book idea is brilliant. it captured me at the first chapter The MC is a strong willed person and the way you detail how he remembers each survival skill is lit. you should check most of the grammar written though

Building A Civilization After Being Stranded In Stone Age

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Thank you for your feedback, i tried to remove the grammatical mistakes and i think the future readers will enjoy it more now, thank you again.