Review Detail of Titaniumpig in Gems of the Desert

Hi, Author here. I have tried to make a proper fantasy book, somewhat in the vein of modern epic fantasy like Brandon Sanderson and Patrick Rothfuss. I obviously am still a long way off from those authors but I would like to think I am getting better and better over time. If you want a book that is focused more on character and world building as well as a slow rise to action and adventure then I think you could really get something out of this. In addition, my grammar and English are both very nearly flawless, especially after several rounds of editing to catch small errors so if you are looking for a book that isn't chock full of grammatical errors, you may have found it.