Review Detail of cutekittensmeow in You Are My Omega

The writing quality is at a middle school level, at best. It's very hard to read because of the low quality writing and frequent rambling descriptions that have nothing to do with the story. (Do we need a multi-paragraph description of Hawaii when the story doesn't take place in Hawaii?) The characters are never described and the ethnicity of their names is seemly random so you can't even be sure how to picture them. It's impossible to get a feel for the world because nothing in this story makes sense. In this world apparently kidnapping, rape, and attempted murder are legal and widely accepted as normal. Also there are no police, because there's no crime when everything is legal. If you want to read this story you need to accept that every single person in this world actively approves of kidnapping, rape, and every other crime. There are no missing people or investigations into doctors suddenly vanishing because crime is so normal that people just disappear all the time. NOTE: The lawlessness I describe above isn't actually established by the author, they'd never do world building to that extent. That's just how everyone acts. No one cares when multiple very blatant crimes happen, even when they happen on video. People just act like it's normal and accepted, crimes like stabbings are treated the way that we treat being late to lunch.