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Make more chapters this is the best potterverse story that I have ever read. Its perfect not at the same time as harry, new interesting place with lots of new ways of life, and lots of magic. And all woth a cool mc that is overpowered enough for it to be cool and not boring.
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thank you for the review, I honestly believe that I was a bit too hasty in my dropping of this one but for me it felt as if there wasn't enough detail, the mc was getting too powerful to quickly and I didn't do the characters well enough compared to my plans. if I do repick this up then it will be under a new title and will be during the summer as I still have school. have a good day!