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LFromHell
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I like the concept and start of the story.. But this story is too dark for my test. I hope you add more tags that suits your story. Main reason I didn't like the novel because character did not add up to the original series. I guess this story for those who like dark, manipulative mc..

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Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)

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I mean, the original Inspired Inventor power came from a Worm Choose Your Own Adventure, and Worm is one of the darkest universes in literature so you kinda need to be dark to stay faithful to the source material. Also, this is a more realistic AU, so some characters need to be changed. Not everyone are saints. Although I would dispute you on the Manipulative MC, Scientia at the start was manipulative but slowly mellows out as the story progresses, their power growing ever strong made such things as mental manipulation unnecessary.

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Well thanks for your reply. I guess I can't really say how much mc change later in the novel but it become heard to read after 19+ chapter..I stared to read this novel because its tensura fic and It written very well. But I don't like dark theme. Well I may read your future fan-fic if they are not so dark. Well good luck with your fanfic...

unit_201:I mean, the original Inspired Inventor power came from a Worm Choose Your Own Adventure, and Worm is one of the darkest universes in literature so you kinda need to be dark to stay faithful to the source material. Also, this is a more realistic AU, so some characters need to be changed. Not everyone are saints. Although I would dispute you on the Manipulative MC, Scientia at the start was manipulative but slowly mellows out as the story progresses, their power growing ever strong made such things as mental manipulation unnecessary.