writer quality is top notch,the character design is a little off page(if that is a word) also it will be adviceable if the mc ( Theodore) could be a little special apart from his specialist in dagger and all that. something like, coming across a hidden artic or journal or having a hidden bloodline,the story development is above average but the fault lie that it is too plain author pls do something about that,thanx
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