not a bad story idea, but the ending is severely rushed and disappointing. with all the fillers throughout the novel, the final battle and ending only spans a couple chapters.
My Daughter is too Cute
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LIKEgetting kicked out wasn't so bad. it only really went downhill after the demon invasion. if author took out that part and took the time to write a proper ending, it wouldn't feel so rushed despite how short the novel is.
Lxpsy:So it already endend ? For me the novel went downhill when he was kicked out .