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Review Detail of JimmyJackJim in I Cultivate Passively

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for those who wish to truly know what it about depend on my thought(do note I only read up to the free trial so far) . -The writing is very lacking but they do hold some interesting concept,but good idea with bad execution still make a bad story. - there is time when information get repeated for words count or treat reader as brain dead , -then sudden world building that doesn't have clear explain of how we know it ,the information just pop up and want us to go with the flow. -few character have introduction but bear no significance to the story, just like how we meet real new people to have a few talk to them then never meet each other again or gain anything from it, it doesn't change anything beside wasting time. -the power is decently new and interesting but how it get used isn't as interesting, -the user reincarnated from modern time but the dude don't know how his system work ,might as well make him a normal ancient dude with a system, -the passive he gain is a bit heavy plot Armour to my liking -time skip when you don't want to have time skip - I notice it say it non clique and it true but to me it feel like the story Just. try write out and be " ooh ohh am I gonna be clique? am i? "then write something opposite in the end

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