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I think the story has potential (maybe a rewrite), there are some major plot holes in the story, like it is explained that nobody knows what their skills will be until they awaken it, and suddenly everybody knows his/her skills. The next is the problem with his sister, no explanation what he does with her since he dumbed her in the hotel... at this rate she will be kidnapped and he will be blackmailed.... In generell the story has potential but it kinda feels like everybody knows nearly as much as MC who reincarnated ... they know "new" dungeons faster than MC etc. some things just don`t add up Than he gets into a "contract" with 1 of the 4 big guilds, and he kinda doesn`t get the items... they can shut down Mt,fuji but he cant get all the skills he needs... He has a tower for training at times 12:1 atm but when does he use it? does it have a cd? nearly nothing is explained. i mean every night he can use it to train or something else that are 96 hours... or he can use the tower to rest and continue to farm dungeons, creat potions in those hours. it feels like he gets all those sss class abilities and doesnt use them. or it is just not explained, he gets basically every 2 lvl 1 extra stat point... last explanation of this was at lvl 8 or something, he is 29 now, what are his stats? we have no clue... how strong is he, and how are we supposed to follow the story in a game world if the author only throws skills at us... he has like 40+ skills combined from his skills, his pets and equipment, (maybe more) and we "i" can really follow. i mean he uses ss-sss skills and they dont feel like they have any importance in this story. sry for the rant+spoiler but the option for this novel where way greater than the 40 chapters i have read. i will put it in the library and see if there will be a difference if not i will just kick it out.... cya

The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility

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