Review Detail of SilentWraithz in Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
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Writing Quality: Not the best, although the author said he had some mistake, almost all of them needs editing. The stability of updates is decent. Plot is decent and is creative. Character design: The MC feels a bit like a pet, and some things are not even properly explained. World Background: Good, but need explaining to those who haven't read PJ.
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
DaoistyNyxQ4
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i didn't really think I was a good writer I just saw myself as decent as for right now I've been writing on is mostly on Greek mythology since pjo hasn't really started yet give me some suggestions like should I give a introduction on Greek mythology and stuff? and what type of things haven't been explained yet I'll edit a note in the end to help explain it
Your novel ideas is good, just don't have the grammar to back it up, for the stories, I think you should explain from the beginning. For grammar, use grammarly, introduction of Gaia helping Rhea, not describing everything that already been described, and maybe add more explanation of powers, divinities, and locations. Of course there many other way, but due to my limited knowledge, I could not find anymore.
DaoistyNyxQ4:i didn't really think I was a good writer I just saw myself as decent as for right now I've been writing on is mostly on Greek mythology since pjo hasn't really started yet give me some suggestions like should I give a introduction on Greek mythology and stuff? and what type of things haven't been explained yet I'll edit a note in the end to help explain it