Very good but need more spacing, i dont know for others but for me it needs more spacing cuz its in webnovel not fanfiction, webnovel is designed for a novels that have less than 5000 words maybe even less than 3000, thats why it needs more spacing than ffn who clearly can take more than enough words (5000-10000)
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