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Review Detail of Wendysyri in The Supermodel's Ex-Fiancé

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Wendysyri
WendysyriLv142yrWendysyri

Meh. Story feels rushed, with ideas just thrown in randomly. Dialogue needs work. Feels like a bunch of teenagers arguing instead of ppl in the late 20-30. This is your typical, “cold, Intelligent, handsome male lead, that contradicts his character by being too stupid to figure out a simple scheme”

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The Supermodel's Ex-Fiancé

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Lazy_Authoress
Lazy_AuthoressLv3Lazy_Authoress

Thank you for your honest review. I will work on the areas you pointed out.