Review Detail of Kyle_Kingsmaker in My Incestuous Life

Well, first time doing a review sorry if isn't useful. For startes, the novel itself is good, it have good characters whom makes you get interested in them and not only on the protagonist, which is good because this shows that the world (and the plot) doesn't revolves only around the MC, so this is an excellent point to have a hooking plot. Second point: The world background. It's good, however it hasn't been exposed much yet (chapter 20 at the moment) but from what there's already it's possible to say that the world isn't bland and the background overall isn't our popular "whatever". Third point: Writing quality. This one is actually more of a remind, there are some (several) minor grammar mistakes which are kinda annoying sometimes (things like swaping "her" for "sher" or "him/he" etc). It isn't the graviest mistakes but annoys the reader (me at least) when reading, but overall the writing quality is acceptable. Forth point: The update stability. In my case, the last chapter until now is chap 20 which was posted 5~6 day ago, however the chapters have sometimes a long interval in between them, it's like the author says on the novel's description he wirtes when he's bored. This, I hope the author can fix, if the author by chance read this review, please create a schedule, it's frustating to not have a schedule to post and this annoys us readers to no end, because we have to always be checking if chap is out and when we have one out, we don't know how much time we'll have to wait for the next. So please author, create a schedule (it's not an order but a request). Well, now for the MC. WARNING From here onwards there are some minor spoilers, nothing that will hinder your reading nor spoil some big thing of the plot, but you have been warned. Okay, go on. The MC in this novel isn't and won't be (I believe) someone who you can say that have "right morals", not like he's some sort of villain, but it's the other way around, he simply doesn't give a quack about people except for his family. So you won't have the "hero protagonist" nor a "goody two shoes" one, the protagonist is selfish (on a moderate level, like every person is), cold (to people who aren't his family) and apathetic most of times (slight reminder: being apathetic doesn't mean being emotionless or incapable of feeling) and by the author's words, he's a battle manic, a die hard one. The MC despite being reincarnated he isn't overpowered nor a genius, instead we see several times him failing on things or being taken by surprise, so yeah he's (will, in my case) be strong but not too strong that will make the story boring and his loved ones aren't potatoes who simply stand there and watch while he gives his life to protect them, but they have their own personalities, strengths and more. So, overall a 4-star novel, I won't give 5 because of my reminders (or complaints if you call them), but I like the novel and am waiting for new chapters. So author, no pressure. but. H-U-R-R-Y U-P. Ou seja, CORRE MEU FI.