Review Detail of Shadow_Knight_2543 in In Danmachi with Plasmids

Okay the grammer in some places needs some touching up because it's not just a wrong letter, no it's just gibberish and especially on some places its an entirely wrong word and just messes a lot up. the Mc is good and amazing at the beginning but then it's like the author got bored and tried to rewrite him but make it seem like it was he Mc's actions changing cause reasons so 20+ chapters in, it gets bad quickly. also the random chapters thrown in between are horrible it goes from a battle to him, 6 days before walking around town, back to the battle. It is just so jagged and really breaks the immersion. the plot is everywhere and in shambles, the author just gets every bad guy gives them assassins and sends them after the Mc every 5 chapters and still 60+ chapters in and is still getting targeted, also all his knowledge at the beginning ya useless and you can chuck it out the window for 99.999% of the novel, which is hilarious because it's the god damn theme of this novel is the powers and knowledge but nope useless, also the author must've lost his script because the 200+ old Mc turns randomly into a horny idiotic teenager that literally puts himself in the open and brags about every god damn thing he's done and immediately everyone starts sending assassins after him and all the secrecy from the beginning with his parents trying to keep him and the relic they’re hiding a secret is useless because he’s just waving around saying I’m here by messing around with every major event then saying In public IM THE ONE WHO DID IT so it was fun but this turned into a dumpster fire.