Review Detail of Spading in In Danmachi with Plasmids
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It would be better if the Author fixed his writing format and his grammar. The adding of '.....' in every 3rd POV sentence or Paragraph is just wrong. Only add '.....' if the person is thinking or something like that Imo.
In Danmachi with Plasmids
Abadom
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Just cause there are a lot of 5-Stars in your FanFic doesn't mean it's good. Your grammar in certain sentences are wrong. For example "Ah his back..." -From the MC himself. There are a couple more examples but since you don't like to listen then sure You are Perfect I guess🙃🙃
Abadom:Grammar isn't that bad, and that's just your perspective. Some countries have their own ways of writing, your review is too harsh and it doesn't really say anything at all. In fact, it seems to be telling lies since some people said my grammar was pretty decent. So I don't see what deserves 2 stars.
Grammar isn't that bad, and that's just your perspective. Some countries have their own ways of writing, your review is too harsh and it doesn't really say anything at all. In fact, it seems to be telling lies since some people said my grammar was pretty decent. So I don't see what deserves 2 stars.
Now I see what you are talking about. You see, I have been rewriting the earlier chapters, and by doing so, many typos were created. One person kindly pointed it out to me, and I plan to fix them soon. And what do you mean I don't like to listen? We had a single interaction. So far, you are being rude to me for no reason. If grammar is your problem they help me by just pointing it out so that I can fix it. And you still didn't explain to me why you gave the fic 2 stars. The current Level of grammar isn't bad enough to remove 3 stars. However, if you say you just didn't like the story, I would be fine with it.
Spading:Just cause there are a lot of 5-Stars in your FanFic doesn't mean it's good. Your grammar in certain sentences are wrong. For example "Ah his back..." -From the MC himself. There are a couple more examples but since you don't like to listen then sure You are Perfect I guess🙃🙃