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The story is good apart from a few grammatical mistakes made. At least in my opinion, the grammatical mistakes do not obstruct the meaning of sentences so it's all good. By the way, if any of you guys like fantasy -action, you should try a recent novel called Dimensional overhaul.

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Dimension travelers

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hi thank you for positive reviev I will try to get even better in future if you have any idea's how to improve my work you can share it on our DC server good night or good day to you I don't know what time is it for you